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All-Mighty X-Men Chapter 1: Genesis

An old man with white hair carrying a box walked down the hallway, along with 2 officers guarding him.

He stopped in front of a cell door.

The guards passed a card in the door and caused the steel and Adamantium door to open, revealing a closer to ordinary prison cell.

Inside, there was a woman wearing a strait jacket that's being held in place thanks to advanced technological cuffs.

Her hair was a mess, and she was clearly angry at the old man.

The guards used a device to allow the woman to walk and move freely before leaving the man and her to talk.

Man: "Wanda, I brought you something. It's your birthday after all."

Wanda: "Is it what I need, father? Freedom?"

The man put the box through a hole in the cell and gave it to his daughter, who opened it quickly.

Wanda: "A cake?"

Man: "I am your father, after all. And I am sorry for--"

Wanda: "You are NOT my father! I have no father. Agatha and Magda took care of me. When I lost everything, you didn't do a thing."

Man: "Wanda, please, I told you I'm sorry and I've been trying my best to make up for it. Please, don't make a scene."

Wanda: "A SCENE!? What, you don't want people to know that the "Oh-so-mighty mutant diplomat, Erik Lensherr, that shoots peacful rainbows from his ass" had a daughter that he did nothing for? That he only visited when Agatha called him?! That he had 2 women, one of which he probably had one night with and then abandoned her forever--"

Erik: "Enoguh! Your mother and I loved each other! We still do!"

Wanda: "Yet, you don't give a damn about ME! It's not like you're new to mutants! Goddamit, you're supposed to be against places like where I am now! Your son and other daughter are always with you, and you forgot about me! You don't deserve to be a father!"

Erik: "What do you want me to do!? This is new for me too!"

Wanda: "I want you to get out of my life. Forever."

Erik: "I can't do that. Piettro and Lorna would like to visit you. We will be back. I talked to the guards, they're allowing you to have a decent birthday with us. Can you not see how much I'm sacrificing for you?"

Wanda: "Well then, stop. I am treated like a filthy subhuman by everyone, and one day, you'll all die, when I'll reign supreme. Go back to your mansion, spent your days with your children. I am still here, yet, you probably still think of me as a monster or an insect."

Erik: "I do not! It's just that...you're dangerous. Agatha knew what she was doing when she sent you here, she knew that this power was too unstable."

The guards entered the room.

Guards: "Mr. Lensherr, it's time to go now."

Erik: "Very well then. I can get out myself."

Later, at the Xavier-Lensherr School for Higher Learning...

A steel skinned musculer man entered the room.

Another man, with completely white hair in his relatively young age, was playing chess against a redhead woman that sat on a wooden chair like the one that the white haired man sat on, was moving the pawns with her mind.

Behind the redhead, a blue and furry man was cheering her, and calling her Jean.

The muscular steel skinned man was sitting behind the white haired man, and seemed to wish him good luck.

White-Haired Man: "Jean, Hank, you see that? Behind you? I heard it's the new mutant Xavier brought here, he can move...hmmm...beer! With his mind! He's about to go soon, you must see him now!"

Hank: "Do you think we would really fall for this, Pietro?"

Pietro: "I am offended that you don't believe me!"

Jean: "Hank, I read his mind. There is a mutant that can move beer in the mansion."

Pietro: "See? Come on, he's right behind you! turn around!"

Pietro moved his hands in superhuman speed, reorganizing the board.

Jean: "I know what you did. Telepath, remember?"

Pietro: "I didn't do anythi--"

Erik entered the room, and sat desperately on the couch in the room, putting his head between his hands.

Pietro: "Dad, you ok? How did it go?"

Erik: "It went exactly like Lorna said it would."

A green haired woman entered the room and ran at Erik to ask him a question.

Woman: "Lorna what? What did I do?"

Erik: "You were right about how Wanda would respond to the gift."

Lorna: "It was obvious. After all, you didn't take care of me too."

The steel skinned man got confused and joined the conversation.

Man: "Didn't take care of you? Aren't you his daughter?"

Pietro: "Piotr, I explained this to you before. Dad traveled around the world with Xavier, making peace everywhere and spreading rainbows and stuff, but before that he had a child with a woman named Magda. Eventually, she knew that he needed to go and continue in his quest, so she allowed him to "be friendly" to other women, in order to make it easier for him to resist the temptation. They both later made a deal where both of them were completely free with this matter, and that it's not cheating."

Piotr: "I remember that. I just thought she was from the same mother as you are."

A bald old man in a wheelchair entered the room and called Erik, that followed him to another room.

They closed the door.

Erik: "Charles, Lorna was right. You are a very lucky man for not being able to bring a child."

Charles: "I disagree. I have no one to raise as my own, and teach with my principles. All of the mutants we teach here will never treat to us as if we were their parents."

Erik: "You always won these arguments. What is it that you wanted to talk about?"

Charles: "I suggest you'll watch this with everyone else. Come with me."

The two men went to a room with a large screen in it, and informed the entire school of the video that they need to watch.

Charles turned up the TV.

Charles: "16:00. This is the time he said he will show this to the world..."

Pietro: "Show what?"

Soon, the show that was on was replaced.

Now, the screen showed thousands of people that hanged, killed, shot, abused and harassed mutants.

A deep voice started talking.

"Humanity. You live in our shadow for so long. You live becase we allow it. Mutants are superior. Yet, you fail to understand this."

The screen switched to a recap of many of Charles and Erik's speeches, and the voice kept talking.

"Some of us, even believe in equality. This is a mistake of course."

The screen switched again, this time to a recording of a forest and everything in it.

"Did the humans spare or tried to become equal with the species before them? No. Then why should we?"

All of the students were terrorized by the events shown.

Yet, it didn't end so soon.

The screen showed a large explosion, live.

"We are the apocalypse of your kind. Many mutants were abused by the so called "Purifiers" and humans of this city. We had killed each and every one of them."

The camera focused on the wreckage of an house. Something was coming out of it. A blue skinned Arabian woman came out of it, now vomiting little copies of human beings.

"Yet, not a single mutant was harmed. They were all activated, forced to evolve into perfection."

The camera showed many mutants marching, shouting sentences who all shown how much they are superior to the human race.

"If you shall continue and stop us, we shall become more brutal. You have 1 day to decide, what is your choice: Put up a fight, or surrender to mother nature. Put it online, shout it, I don't care how. The future is now, and the future starts with US."

Suddenly, the mansion began shaking, with the man known as Dominik Petrakis, or as "Avalanche", at its center.

He had many wire like patterns glowing on him, and had no visible pupils.

As the mansion began sinking and breaking into the ground who was suffering from the same damages, Charles and Erik cleared almost everyone out.

Lorna, Piotr, Pietro, Jean, Hank, Erik, Charles, and two new mutants, one is a man who is made of ice and another who has wings, all stayed.

Man with wings: "Dominik, stop this!"

Dominik: "NONE CAN STOP MOTHER NATURE!"

He sent a shockwave at the mutants.

The ice-man had countered his attack by freezing it and sending it back at him.

Lorna and Erik used their magnetic powers to hold the mansion in its place, though they still couldn't completely stop it.

The winged man, known as Angel, had began shooting his feathers at Avalanche.

Jean and Charles tried to force Avalanche to stop.

Hank, Piotr and Pietro attacked Avalanche as fast as they could, in an attempt to subdue him.

Dominik roared with anger as he broke free and brought down the mansion, and caused it to fully sink into the ground.

Everyone watched as it went down.

Yet, Erik was flying out of the remains of the mansion, along with Lorna, Angel and Jean, each carrying another person.

Only Iceman and Hank were left down there.

Jean shed a tear and entered the mansion again, to save Hank.

Iceman and Hank were fighting Avalanche, but lost.

As Hank fell to the ground, injured and unconscious, Iceman continued shooting ice at Dominik.

Jean picked Hank up and carried him to safety.

With all of her anger, she formed a blast of energy from her hands and knocked Dominik out.

Before she could take Iceman, the mansion completely destroyed itself, and she could only save herself.

All of the students were watching what happened with terror.

The officers called Erik and informed him that his daughter vanished in a breakout, and that a few mutants kidnapped her and teleported away.

The only surviving device from the mansion was the TV.

It was turned on again, automatically.

It showed another series of horrifying images, with the same voice talking again.

"I inform all of the traitors of mutantkind, we will not tolerate this. You had your chance to join us, Charles Xavier and Erik Lensherr. You denied it. And now, we shall kill you. But other mutants shall survive, if they make the right choice. Pick the future. These horrible humans should not survive. If you are able to evolve, you must do so. Avalanche was a great supporter and a tool. He shall be mourned, and will be avenged when the horsemen will ride."

All of the mutants in the area quickly entered Erik's truck, and began driving, running away from everything.

Question is: Could they run away from this...destiny?

To be continued...