Talk:Contender Vol 1 4/@comment-1755931-20190710184408

Things are moving just a wee bit too fast (even as Starlight moves too slowly, so I'm not one to talk...) It's still a strong premise but we hardly learn much about Jennifer before her relationship with Ethan escalates, and sometimes its hard to pull out personality traits from Ethan's mentors since we speed from scene to scene so quickly. Right now, besides their relationships to Ethan, the two adults are interchangeable.

I hope this doesn't come off as too condescending or harsh! I'm enjoying this series and I know the first arc is always a bit of a slog. The training sequence was fun and it was good to see Ethan's flaws take shape. Can't wait to see what comes next!