Talk:Contender Vol 1 6/@comment-1755931-20190816193147

Things are definitely heating up! Its good to see Ethan has some flaws to explore. I admit the fight with his Dad was a bit too physical (I got confused and thought his dad hit him which was pretty jarring) but I get what you were going for and I think it mostly paid off.

Out of everyone I'm most curious about Jennifer. I want to see what she's like when she's not around Ethan, what makes her more than just his love interest. I'm excited to see you continue toshake things up and explore the characters.