Talk:Contender Vol 1 1/@comment-5041674-20180517195557

I have some problems with this issue to be honest. The character introductions are very plain. There needs to be more to them than just saying "this is so and so". I don't really care much for the characters because there just kinda there, ya know?

Also people are way too passive to be seeing someone like him with his powers. If you suddenly see a person throw a football way too far for realistic human anatomy, or gain lightning on their feet, someone is gonna be concerned. Will this lead to his superhero persona being public?

Also, it's rather short. I feel extending it a bit could have helped create more dynamics for the characters, because the last thing you need is forgettable side characters.