Board Thread:Promotions/@comment-5041674-20141222185013/@comment-6548012-20141224101248

Well, your panel seems pretty good, although Emerald Man seems pretty slender and the buildings are angled.

Also, to contradict what you said before, a third person narrator isn't really a guy who speaks in the name of the heroes and the villains. The narrator can tell the story how he percieves it. That's a pillar of literature (French literature, at least) and it's been popularized by Jean de la Fontaine. Although, I'd prefer a third person narrator, even if a first person narrator isn't too bad, but it may be too resemblant with Spider-Man.

About your cover, the graphics are pretty neat, although you should ink it better, and erase your drawing lines. Plus, the logo isn't right, you should make it with a computer, because you simply can't make a right, neat, and sleek logo every time you draw your cover. I know a lot about human capacities, and that is not possible, at least not with the techniques you're using. The seal also, that's a thing you do by computer at the very end. Pretty much like the detail that I'm worried about the most, the text. Don't do your banners and text by hand, because science and typography says that you can't assure a perfect everything concerning text with your bare hands. I don't mean to be offensive, but you need to use your computer a lot more, in fact, the only thing that you make without your computer is the cover art. And even there, you can save money to buy Paint Tool SAI, and then you can fully use your computer for the creation of your covers.

I hope this helps.