Thread:Uncleben/@comment-24751588-20131028010922/@comment-1886103-20140108232424

Alright well, I can try to think of some more stuff

As it stands, I say let's start with Redemption: Juggernaut. I feel like the ending is weak, and the whole Phoenix thing is a little "deus ex machina" (plus I have an idea for another story and it requires using Phoenix, so I don't want to be to repetitive), so if you'd want to do a rewrite, or some jot notes or something...?