Thread:Uncanny X-Factor/@comment-34376546-20180813011635/@comment-34376546-20180813020514

HeUncanny X-Factor wrote: I didn't leave a comment, but in fact I have already read your article. It's a great concept, but suffers a little in execution. I would consider changing the cast or expanding some fight scenes, maybe altering some of the phrasing a little. But I think it has really great bones. Hey X sorry to bother you but i just finshed creating a whole new plot for my newly titled Fantastic Four: World's Greatest i didn't change the main cast though by i did add new characters though