Thread:BeholdtheVision/@comment-6548012-20160220144740

Hello, how are you? So, here's a pitch for Paragon Comics, you tell me what you think of it, like, in all honesty, if there's anything wrong or that you don't like terribly much, say it&mdash;the pitch isn't improved yet, so this first draft might change, drastically in fact, and I may not have a schedule to put issues out, because, it takes a very long time for me. This pitch is also very vulgarized, so that you get the basic shit, ya know.

So, there's this dude. A normal dude, he's got no powers, he, uh, looks very simple and regular, like if you walked by him, you wouldn't care a lot, at all, in fact. But this dude, seeing the overgrowing "evil" in his neighbourhood, decides to take action against that. This comic book takes place in the nineties, and it starts in 1991, so before the invention of the Internet. The bloke has military training under his belt, and is a little bit of pugilist, à la Battlin' Jack "the Devil" Murdoch from MARVEL, but most importantly, he's very intelligent. He establishes multiple networks in the city, ranging from transportation, to intel. There will be an origin story for the first issue, but all in all, the comic series will really start when the guy is well established, and the element that causes everything to go into action is, well, the criminality reaching its highest possible point, but also the fact that to take care and possibly upgrade his network, he needs to work with other folk, as a community&mdash;so the story will highlight social issues, and have some sort of morale, whilst it takes a more realistic approach of crime.

So, what do you think of this pitch, is it good for you? Can it fit in the universe? 