Thread:Uncanny X-Factor/@comment-28119130-20141129152820/@comment-28119130-20141130064051

I already changed it, because I really didn't like the first one, but here is what I already have for my second version:

 Stark Tower; a big tower in New York City. Tony Stark was on the top floor, getting a drink for him and his girlfriend, Virginia ‘Pepper’ Potts. He walked towards her, as he put on some music.

 “Well done,” Pepper complimented, “For once you succeeded in making a great romantic evening without anything bad happening!”

 “The last one wasn’t my fault,” Tony defended himself, “I didn’t want that automatic-suit to start walking!”

 “Well that little accident did cost you a lot of money!” Pepper chuckled.

 “Doesn’t matter,” Tony replied, as he put the drinks on a small table in front of their sofa, “I’ve got more money than I can spend!”

 “We have more money than we can spend!” Pepper corrected him, with a grin on her face, “What’s that noise?”

 “EMERGENCY!” JARVIS suddenly said, “EMERGENCUY! LEAVE THE BUILDING AT ONCE! EMERGENCY!”

 “What’s happening?” Tony jumped off from the sofa, and ran towards the small, blue screen in the wall.

 “INCOMING MISSILES!” JARVIS warned.

 “Oh my god!” Pepper screamed. She had turned on the TV. There was breaking news. Pepper got her bag and ran to the lift.

 “What’s the matter?” Tony asked, as he walked to the TV.

 “The missile is heading straight for Stark Tower!”   the newsreader announced, as footage of a missile flying through New York was shown, ''“The missile just came out of nowhere! It just appeared in the sky, and it seems to be heading for Stark Tower!”''

 “Hurry up!” Pepper shouted angrily and panicked as she slammed the lift’s button numerous times.

 “Too late!” Tony told her, as he grabbed a suitcase, and pulled Pepper outside.

 “Where are we going?” she asked.

 “Don’t panic!” Tony answered, “We’re going to jump!”

<p class="MsoNormal"> “AAAH!” Pepper screamed, as Tony pulled her of the edge of the building. They slid down of the windows. Then, Tony’s suitcase started to fold out.

<p class="MsoNormal"> “Always handy to have Mark V around,” Tony smiled, as the suitcase started forming into an Iron Man armour, which clamped himself onto Tony’s body. When it were finished, he grabbed hold of Pepper and flew into the sky, away from Stark Tower.

<p class="MsoNormal">' BOOM!!! '

<p class="MsoNormal"> The missile hit the top part of the tower, and it exploded in flames. Parts of the building crumbled apart and started to fall down.