Talk:Misfortune Vol 1 1/@comment-5041674-20160516223319/@comment-5041674-20160517065029

Seeing how well you wrote this, you can make some pretty good scenes that don't involve fights. All you need to do is be more descriptive. Let the words flow like a waterfall, falling onto the page.

You don't even have to make it long if you want. It works this way, though. I like it.

Also shameless plug but Emerald 1 10 has also been released.