Thread:Shadow757/@comment-5795364-20140926110640/@comment-5795364-20140928160952

I think one page should be the dialogues and the other is the assignment itself(and why did you wrote "Chapter 2" instead of assignment 2?

I'ma motherfucker ninja!

But i actually really love this. And how did you made different names for hand soldiers who lead to pages that already exist?

You should add the lose and stuff as header 3.

I think Deploys in a MarTac style game can be just a flight deck mission that is story themed, and meant for a specific hero or hero class.

It's not the hell's kitchen, for the first time i saw you do that, you didn't put something like Destroyer, when it was supposed to be like that. Point it, they say Hell's Kitchen, not the Hell's Kitchen, it's a place's name.

"Matt! Oh no! --- Nick! Daredevil tried to protect me from a dagger that Bullseye threw but he got instead hurt! He needs a medical help! Right now!" That's not an Elektra dialogue, she doesn't show emotions so much, try to make it a little more cold hearted and i'll tell you if it's good.