Talk:Contender Vol 1 2/@comment-24799099-20190614002457

Hm, I do believe the dialogue is a little flat, it would be better to spread stuff out into multiple lines, rather than rush through the main points. Like give more lines to show off people's personalities, even if it distracts from the main plot. I personally wouldn't mind longer issues as a result. Nevertheless, I like where this is going.