A New Hero

This is the experimental first installment of a series of stories by Guy covered in squirrels says what? As it is experimental, it will be written in script format. If you are interested in the story but don’t like the format, if you enjoy the format, if you thought that the story and format were both terrible, or you have writing tips, please comment so! I would like to emprove my writing, and anything helps!

Story
[Ariana wakes up and starts to get ready for the day with narration overlapping]

Ariana: My name is Ariana. I was born in Queens, New York, and I’m just a regular girl. At least, that’s what I thought.

[Cut to Ariana walking in her kitchen with her mom already there]

Ariana: Bye mom!

Ari’s Mom: Bye sweetie! Love you!

Ariana: Love you too!

[Cut to Ariana getting a bike out of her garage and riding it to school]

Ariana (voiceover): I thought that life was great. I had just moved back to Queens after living in another city for all of middle school, and had got into the same school my best friend from when I was a kid was going to. But first days of school are never successful.

[The Terrigen wave falls over the school. Ariana falls off bike.]

Ariana (voiceover):