Thread:MaxGoji 2.0/@comment-25441082-20170214172650/@comment-25441082-20170424230728

Things we should change: we should take the part where peter says that everything is peaceful as we have an introduction already, aunt May probably should't hate spider-man ,Peter should't really think about using the money for himself but right away he wants to give it to aunt may or maybe wants to pay the rent for his apartment (which he shares with harry) the recombinatior should't really be used maybe we could use a serum and a gas thrower or something  and the fight could be more visceral.