Talk:Pathogen Vol 1 1/@comment-5041674-20180326201426

Very interesting issue! Albeit, I feel there could be more in here. You have the rumor and Kent learning his powers as well as escaping Antigen, but that's it. I would love, as a reader, to be shown him discovering the rumor, instead of being told. Perhaps your goal is to go slow, but the beginning felt sorta weak to me. Still like the premise behind this, though, and the image of using scissors to try and remove it? Gross, but I think that's what you were going for, and it worked.