Thread:BeholdtheVision/@comment-27816990-20160315064435/@comment-27816990-20160511141523

Hello again (part 2). I know that Paragon is rebooting (and I also know that 3 people are considering joining) but, here I am, pitching again. This story is much more complicated due to the fact that there are two perspectives (this is a comic of a duo). One is from the moon, the other from Earth.

There is a species living on the moon called the Lunari. They are peaceful people, and prefer not to do war. But then some space bandits kill their colony. Only one Lunari survived, and that is Luna, the daughter of the Lunari's king.

Then to earth. There is this girl named Riley, and her parents are astronauts. Then after a mission to the moon, her parents suddenly dissapear. She joined a space program for teens ran by NASA, to find out what happened to her parents (also because she wanted to go to space).

They both eventually meet and become friends, fight space monsters, you know, the usual. In this pitch, I may have bended some rules for Paragon...because A) In this story, there are people living on the moon, and NASA is corrupt, making the other people's stories limited and B) Theres already Starlight, who seems to be space-related already.