Thread:Uncanny X-Factor/@comment-34376546-20180813011635/@comment-34376546-20180813014547

Uncanny X-Factor wrote: I didn't leave a comment, but in fact I have already read your article. It's a great concept, but suffers a little in execution. I would consider changing the cast or expanding some fight scenes, maybe altering some of the phrasing a little. But I think it has really great bones. thanks for the advice, yeah i think im going to go back and redo the fight scenes and giving them more depth